prefect school!

In a perfect school I would change many things from this school. The first thing i would change are the dances, I don't pay ten dollars a dance to stand awkwardly by some one I want to get my grind on! Mr. Maguire just needs to get it through his thick head that this is just way it is. Another thing that would be tight is if we did things like they do at Tumwater, everyother friday they get a half day and they get two thirty minute breaks everyday. that makes this place seem like prison.

Becoming a good writer

I like to believe that since my freshmen yera at Oly high school i have become a much better writer. As a freshmen i didnt go into much detail about what i was writing about or use very much description. I also had terrible spelling and grammer. I know ever one makes small errors ever now an then, but mine were beyond belife, so if you thought this was bad you would have hated me freshmen year.
I know you didn't hate me because i was in your class freshmen year and I'm pretty sure I was your favorite student. Freshmen Year i could barely fill up half a page in writing, now i could fill a whole book!(please don't ask me too though). English has never been my stronest subject, but it has been a good expierence learnig and growing.

Injustice

One case in todays modern court i have come across a case that was not entirely fair and that is the case of Baltimore vs. Officer Rivieri. Officer Rivieri was fired from the Baltimore police department because he was cought on tape "wrastling a skate boarder on the groud" using too much force and other things. I think the Officer was trying to show those kids they needed to shape up.
Those skate boarders were a bunch of punks, they think they can just skate board where ever and when ever they want with out disurbing any body. Also they have no sence of respect for any one, calling the officer dude, hes not Dude, hes not Man, hes Officer Rivieri. Thise kids had it coming for them because there parents weren't hard enough on them and let them do what ever they want.

american

Being an American means many things to me. I have been to many other countries outside the US that don't have as much freedom as we do and the government is too poor and can't afford good things for there people. A lot of people always talk about how poor of a job our goverment does(which sometimes is true) and how terrible this counrty is, but they forget about the simgle things they enjoy and take for granted, such as having clean water all the time and getting ateast three meals a day usually more.
Ever since I visited those counrties I think about how great it is to enjoy all these freedoms. Now I know what people mean when they say, "you're lucky to have that" because a lot of the things we have in our society, we are truely lucky to have.